it once was a trivial task before me
but life is complicated and you're a long story
the heat consumes me as i drip to the ground
moving blurry as the world makes no sound
it's not a matter of seeing shadows
and it's not a matter of being young
it's all about carrying the banner
it's all about being someone new
it's you, it's you, it's all about you
it's you, it's you, it's all about being you
the sun it sets like a fallen rocket
its breath is milky, its shores are rocky
i'm dragging breaking, like a boy so lonely
as the sun it sets, and breaks my bones
November 9, 2004 Subject:
Good, but it's too bad the quality is pretty poor, but I won't hold it against him.
Dgold at AHT -
July 10, 2004 Subject:
A good song
I liked the song & appreciate you releasing this for free. If you had a whole internet album I would listen. Is it the J. Aizen who does so much administrative work for the Archive? The only thing I didn't like was the pop at the end of the song. It already sounded finished with the dwindling chord.
June 27, 2004 Subject:
Nice effort here, Jon. Every few measures, I catch some Elliott Smith in your voice that makes my day. I see that you have put up about 3 songs in the past 4 years. I'm 20 and trying to write stuff lately. Maybe I'll post some. Thanks for "carrying a banner" and putting your stuff up here. Find some accompaniment and start putting together some music. I see a lot of potential. Good luck to you.